Posts Tagged ‘books on writing’

Working with Fred

Never underestimate what can be made in the basement.

Those of you have read Damon Knight’s Creating Short Fiction are likely familiar with the concept of Fred:

“Unconscious” is a lousy term, by the way–it isn’t unconscious, it just has trouble communicating. “The silent mind” would be better, maybe, or “the tongue-tied mind,” but I prefer to call it “Fred.”

“To be productive, Fred needs a lot of stimulating input–odd facts or fancies to knock together, insights, specimens, interesting data of all kinds.”

I write about this now, because I’ve been feeding Fred over the last few days. He doesn’t know it, but I’ve peeked in on him working away while I walked the dog or drove to the store or washed the dishes.

I’ve been revising a short story and I’m relying on Fred to help me round things out and give a sense of wholeness to the story. To that end, I’ve been feeding Fred bits of this and that to see what he churns out. He’s all about production. The more he churns out, the more likely there is to be a nugget of goodness in there.  So I keep feeding him and wouldn’t you know it, Fred has been busting his hump.

Stephen King, in On Writing, A Memoir of the Craft referred to his muse this way:

There is a muse… He’s a basement guy. You have to descend to his level… You have to do all the grunt labor, in other words, while the muse sits and smokes cigars and admires his bowling trophies and pretends to ignore you. Do you think this is fair? I think it’s fair. He may not be much to look at, that muse-guy, and he may not be much of a conversationalist (what i get out of mine is mostly surly grunts, unless he’s on duty), but he’s got the inspiration.”

Hm. Fred and this basement guy seem to have an awful lot in common. Maybe Fred is the basement guy’s name. Or at the very least, they play pinochle and swill Schlitz together on the weekends.

Who’s your muse? Where do you draw your inspiration? Fairies? Homonculi? Aliens? I wanna know.

This guy’s not a bad muse. Just saying is all.

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11 2010

Writing Library

Stack o Books

Stack o Writing Books

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I cannot read enough about the craft of writing. I love it especially when the author offers insight to how he or she does what they do. That doesn’t mean I want to copy it, but there may be something in there that I haven’t yet considered. It’s like digging around the library and finding books you didn’t know you needed to read.

To the left is my writing reference library sans dictionaries. I just added a few titles over the last week and have been enjoying digging through them. The new titles are listed below with review snippets to give you an idea of their content:

The Art of Subtext: Beyond Plot – I’ve yet to really settle into this one. Once I’ve finished my latest draft of Shadow of the Black City, I’ll take time to go through the who thing.

Here’s a an excerpt from a Publishers Weekly review to give you an idea of the contents: …as the brief chapters of this little book build on each other, Baxter’s observations-which initially seem more like interesting rhetorical devices than substantive arguments-gain clarity and momentum, and the accumulation of anecdotal asides about writers’ workshops and former students turn them from annoying interjections into helpful indicators of Baxter’s relationship with literature. Many of the issues raised in this volume are as old as the study of literature itself, but Baxter’s ability to ask unusual and incisive questions of familiar topics (Why is the volatility of Dostoyevsky’s characters so unpleasant? Why is it so difficult-and yet so vital-to describe facial features?) makes this little volume worthwhile for the engaged student of literature. – Publishers Weekly

Self-Editing for Writers – (Thanks to Sara McClung for the recommendation!) I’ve read about 50 pages of this one. The information on show v. tell is particularly useful. The chapter on characterization and exposition has great, succinct examples of good and bad uses of both

Creating Short Fiction – I read all the way through it and look forward to reading it again. There’s a lot of good stuff in there that is useful not only for short fiction, but for all fiction. Knight divides the book into six parts: Developing Your Talent as a Writer, Idea into Story, Beginning a Story, Controlling a Story, Finishing a Story, and Being a Writer.

From Jeff VanderMeer Booklifenow.com – Knight was known for his science fiction writing, but this guide is much more universal than that and steeped in the wisdom of fifty years of writing fiction. Perhaps more importantly, Knight includes diagrams of various plot structures. Early on, this helped me visualize my plots as diagrams and sometimes enabled me to spot structural problems as a result. His thoughts on “form” are also useful to beginning and intermediate writers.

Revising Fiction: A Handbook for Writers -Because I have only skimmed this one, here’s VanderMeer’s assessment of this work from Booklifenow.com - Madden breaks fiction down into its components (like character, theme, setting, etc.) and then creates subcategories of possible problems you may be having in your work. He uses examples of these problems from the drafts of books and stories by famous writers, and then shows you how the writer fixed the problem in the final draft. Just being able to see an early paragraph from The Great Gatsby and compare it to the published version is invaluable, but Madden’s advice and commentary make this my favorite writing book of all time.

Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft – I just got this one two days ago so here’s the info from the back cover – The most widely used and respected book on writing fiction, Writing Fiction guides the writer from first inspiration to final revision. Supported by an abundance exercises, this guide/anthology explores and integrates the elements of fiction while offering practical techniques and concrete examples. A focus on the writing process in its entirety provides a comprehensive guide to writing fiction, approaching distinct elements in separate chapters while building on what has been covered earlier. Topics include free-writing to revision, plot, style, characterization, dialogue, atmosphere, imagery, and point of view.

Narrative Design – I’ve read the first short story and accompanying notes.  Bell breaks down each story in terms of plot, character, tone, point of view, dialogue and design. Other elements such as time management, imagery and description, and suspense are addressed where appropriate. The story was enjoyable, and the analysis helped drive home some techniques and opened up possibilities for my writing. I look forward to delving into the other 11.

That should be enough to chew on for a couple of months. I got a few recommendations for Bird by Bird, which I plan to track down through our library system. It’s a 50/50 proposition at best. If I can’t get it that way, I’ll break down and by a used copy somewhere.

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02 2010

Books on Writing

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My lovely wife and I have come to an agreement: She gets to spend $50 on art supplies and I get to spend $50 on whatever floats my boat.

I’ve chosen books. More specifically, I intend to expand my writing library.

Jeff VanderMeer posts his list of favorite books on writing at Booklifenow.com. Go check it out if you haven’t already. It seems to be a great list, but I don’t know for sure because I own exactly ZERO of those books. You can be sure some of them will make their way into my currently meager library.

However, I’m also looking for suggestions for books that you, my precious few readers, consider indispensable for your writing life.

I’ve mentioned some of the writing books in my possession here, here, and here. Feel free to revisit any of those or hip me to one of the thousands of books out there.

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02 2010